Peer Edits 3

Katie Baldwin

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, the point was very clear throughout the entire story.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, it gets very detailed but its easy to follow

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
It presents the arguments from both sides clearly but supports their side

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Very much so, and relevant

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes

Jon Perkins

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, the point was very easy to follow throughout the entire story.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, it gets very detailed but clear

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
It presents the arguments from both sides but shows obvious support for their opinion

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes its an overlooked topic

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes the story is very organized

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes